Agent Jessica in the hands of the Mafia 2

Jessica’s acting: Reactions to stomach punches are the things I value most. In my previous custom Jessica’s acting was good but her reactions were not really my favourite (except in the excellent first minutes). I particularly don’t like too much the moaning. In this custom she is totally overpowered from the beginning, exhausted, barely conscious, all the time in deep nausea. Her reactions are always low-key, as if she was fighting her own internal sickness and nausea (very much like in the legendary vis “Jessica’s 6 punches”, one of my favorite). In every part she is gradually worked over by stomach punches, first stunned and then getting dizzy and groggy, reacting weaker and weaker, until she is only barely conscious (but never totally out). My special requests:

PLEASE DO: Short grunts (like her breath is cut by the stomach punches). Low-key longer sighs after initial reactions (like ‘oh…! ufhhh…’). Silent facial reactions (wincing, eyes shut, mouth open). “Ooffing” (air accumulates in the cheeks and is exhaled as result of the blow to the stomach). When she is passing out, gasps (air is sucked in with a quick wheeze) followed by sighs (her breath is cut by a punch, then she softly lets the air out of her).

PLEASE DO NOT: Loud, screams, moans, whining, whimpering or crying.

Mafia gangsters acting: They are mostly silent, and they make no fight noises. The two males are very pro. One (Jack) is a bit more evil-ish, as if enjoying the situation to a certain extent. All or most of their stomach punches go to the pit of Jessica’s stomach, above her navel and below the arch formed by her ribs. The punches make actual contact, denting her stomach as much as it is comfortable for Jessica, and the fists “stay” for fractions of a second, not bouncing.

Camera: As usual, mostly close to the action (about 1 meter away) unless instructed, if possible moving, changing positions, and making regular close-ups of Jessica’s stomach and face.

Sounds: As usual, subtle sound effects, not loud or exaggerated.

Script: 

Part 1. Captured (around 7 minutes): 

Camera fades in Jessica trying to enter a Mafia facility, entering a room. Unexpectedly, the lights turn on and Jack says out loud: “Agent Jessica, right? We were expecting you”. She realizes immediately that she has been set up and she tries to escape. But she is caught by Kevin, and when she tries to fight her way out, she is sucker-punched in the stomach. She doubles forward, stunned, but recovers, although she looks winded.

She is firmly held by Kevin, and Jack approaches her. “Hello Agent Jessica, have you been training?” And she delivers another powerful uppercut into Jessica’s stomach. Jessica opens her mouth in silence, and her body doubles forward all the way again, knees almost touching the floor, then she coughs.

The gangsters straighten her up. Jack grabs her by her chin, but Jessica shakes her way. Jack says “I always liked you when you get feisty,” then she grabs Jessica, his body pressed against hers, and he starts a sequence of hard punches to her stomach. Jack takes his time between punches, allowing Jessica to fully develop her reactions. Jessica proudly contains her reactions as best as she can. But, as Jack´s punches eventually breach her abdominal resistance, her reactions start to show and Jessica slumps over Jack. He continues the “intimate punching” until Jessica’s legs seem to fail.

This first section of Part 1  last about 3 minutes.

When Jessica’s legs start to falter, Jack and Kevin place Jessica’s back against the wall. She is pinned against the wall with her arms spread to her sides. Jack says “Is good to have you back. Let’s put your training to test.” With that, Jack and Kevin begin to fire viciously placed pit-of-the-stomach punches (precisely above her navel and below the top of her rib cage). Punches come with calculated witing time for Jessica to fully develop reactions to each punch. Jessica receives these punches with her back against the wall, her head falling back and her mouth opening uselessly, unable to breathe. Ideally, the camera takes the fists digging into Jessica’s stomach, then her face, then the fists again, then her face, and so on. Jessica convulses, eyes shut, mouth open, unable to produce any sounds, until she seems unable to breathe at all, like a fish out of the water (a bit like in “6-punches”).

When she seems to be very worn out, the men let Jessica fall to the ground. She rolls on her side, eyes shut and mouth open. The camera closes on her face, and to her faint, soft, almost inaudible sighs. We can hear Jack’s voice saying “We’ll have to work on her” and the scene fades out.

During all of Part 1 it would be great if the camera remains close to Jessica, capturing all her sounds and making frequent changes of position and close-ups of her face, the stomach punches and her bare back and body sagging or folding. Be careful with edition glitches (for example, that she appears composed after she appeared passing out).

Part 2. Tortured against the wall (around 5 minutes):

Camera fades in Jack talking on a cell phone with his boss, in Russian. He explains the situation and receives orders (but we can’t hear the conversation). In a back plan, Jessica is pinned with her back against a wall, her arms and legs secured in such way she is in a crucified position. Kevin is punching her in the stomach, once every 4-5 seconds. With every punch Jessica gasps (or produces a short muffled grunt) and then droops, winces, and faintly sighs (no moaning). She seems to be taking the punishment in total resignation. But the camera stays on Jack, listening to instructions on the phone (so that we can hear Jessica’s sounds).

This first section of Part 2 should last around 1 minute.

Jack finishes his cell phone conversation and he looks satisfied. He approaches Jessica and stops Kevin. “I will take over now” he says. He grabs Jessica by the hair and whispers in her ear “They are letting me play with you this time.” He grabs Jessica’s head with one hand, approaching her as if he wanted to whisper in her ear, and with her other hand he starts to deliver controlled-force punches in Jessica’s stomach, in no hurry, letting Jessica develop her reactions. The punches make Jessica gag and gasp, but it is important that she does not moan or whimper. Eventually, she seems completely overpowered, but never really out. Jack continues with Jessica almost unresponsive (but not quite), almost as if he was using her for his own training. Then lets her go, saying “good girl”.

During all of Part 2 it is important that the camera remains close to Jessica, capturing all of her sounds and making frequent changes of position and close-ups of her face, the stomach and groin punches and her body wrapping around the punches. The hand camera (or the edition) should toggle positions, trying to keep the narrative coherent.

Part 3. Tortured on the couch (around 4 minutes):

The camera fades in Jack on the cell phone again, arguing about something with his boss. In the back plan Jessica is sitting on a couch, her hands spread and secured with ropes along the top of the couch. Kevin is sitting by her, punching her stomach. Again, he is not in a rush, letting her develop her reactions. Jessica looks exhausted. Sometimes she sags forward, folding over, sometimes she slumps on the back of the chair. It would be great if, in this section, she sometimes “ooffs” (air accumulating in her cheeks, then puffed out).

This first section of Part 3 should last around 1 minute.

Jack finishes his conversation and comes to the couch. He tells Kevin “You are too nice. You need to be more vicious. You see, this is the spot”. And he places his fingers above Jessica’s navel and below the top of her ribcage. Then Jack grabs Jessica by the throat, forcing her to open her mouth and emptying a small amount of liquid in it. Jessica gags and coughs, forced to take the liquid in. Very quickly, she starts to look dazed and groggy, as if chloroformed.

“Do not worry, this will not kill you. It’s just a little bit, and it will only soften you… not too much… I want you to last…”. After saying that, Jack makes a sign to Kevin, and they start to take turns punching Jessica in the strategic spot. Punches do not seem brutal and there is a while between them, but they devastate Jessica, shutting her capacity to breathe, making her deeply nauseous. The guys let Jessica develop her full reactions, gasping and gaping silently like a fish out of the water, then punching her again as soon as she seems to be breathing again. Jessica’s body seems close to be on the brink of shutting down for good, then Jack signals Kevin to stop.

Part 4. Tortured on the table (around 9 minutes): 

The camera fades again in the sounds of Jessica’s weak reactions. In the first plan, Jack is on her cell phone again. On a back plan Jessica is spread flat on top of a table, with her legs dangling off one side of the table to prevent her abdominal muscles from flexing. Then Jessica becomes the first plan of the camera. Kevin is pinning her arms above her head with one hand, and with his free hand he is punching Jessica in the stomach. Jessica seems completely overwhelmed by these punches. Her eyes are closed, only able to give short “oh” short groans, followed by uneven sighs with each punch (please ask her to vary a bit, and please ask her not to do repetitive moans like in my previous custom). A bit of drool (water) has been rolling off her mouth.

Camera takes for this part toggles between the following:

1)From above the scene, picturing her from groin to face.
2)From behind Jessica’s feet towards the rest of her torso.
3)From behind Jessica’s head towards the rest of her torso.

This first section of part 4 should last about 3 minutes.

Then Jack ends his cell phone conversation and asks Kevin to hold Jessica for her. “I am telling you you’re being too good. Let’s wrap this up”. He stands by the table, whispers something inaudible in Jessica’s ear, administrates a bit more liquid in her mouth, and starts to dig punches below the top of Jessica’s ribcage, with vicious precision. The punches are not violent, but they dig visibly into the pit of Jessica’s stomach. And, this time, they come non-stop, one every 2-3 seconds. Jessica comes back from semi-consciousness only to briefly try to flex her muscles one last time, to say “my… stomach…”. Then she can only pay attention to her own body’s internal devastation. As Jack punches her stomach non-stop, Jessica can only produce short, instinctive, muffled, barely audible reactions. Sometime she gasps, sometimes she groans, sometimes there is only silence and jus facial reactions. But please no moaning (particularly not the repetitive long moans she develops in my last custom).

The camera takes this part of the scene toggling from different angles, always close to Jessica:

1)From Jessica’s feet towards her torso.
2)Close-up of her stomach being punched.
3)Close-ups of her winded face.
4)From above the scene, picturing her body getting punched.
5)From behind Jessica’s head towards the rest of her torso (another long take).
6)Final close-ups of her face drooling.

As Jessica’s abdominal resistance is done with, she becomes just a soft, almost unresponsive punching bag. Then Jack asks Kevin to finish her up. Kevin takes over and continues the pit-of-the-stomach punching. Jessica is half unconscious, she can only take the punches, and then by instinct softly sigh her air out. It will be great if this last scene is long and gradual, Jessica producing softer and softer sounds and sighs until the very end, never being completely silent.